OK mostly everything is written in the file I attached. I just need you guys to switch up the words to make it sound completely different. Maybe add a better hook if you can. And for the thesis write what her impact is and why I chose her as my hero (literally write it as if its your own essay, I dont care). Please make sure to include at least 2 quotes and add a work cited page for those quotes with links!! In the conclusion refer everything to the future in the intro refer everything in the past/present. Also I have 6 figures of speech throughout the writing and Im assuming those can stay.
I AM ALSO GOING TO ADD A FINAL DRAFT SAMPLE SHE SENT US AND A PEER REVIEW SHEET WITH THE STUFF SHE WANTS ON THE ESSAY.
^^ SO pretty much make my essay look close to the sample she sent. And also to have almost all the requirements that the peer review sheet asks for!!!
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